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Observations of wind ramps generated by thunderstorm outflows
Abstract. Thunderstorms occur frequently in regions with strong wind resources, such as the U.S. Great Plains. The outflows from these storms generate wind ramps, where the wind speed and direction change dramatically over a short period. Wind turbines are designed to withstand wind ramps such as the "extreme coherent gust with direction change" (ECD) defined by the International Electrotechnical Commission (IEC), but this depiction is highly simplified and based on point measurements. In the current investigation, we characterize the wind ramps generated by six thunderstorm outflows observed in northern Oklahoma using dual-Doppler X-band radar measurements covering a 160 km3 volume, and compare their properties with the IEC-defined ECD. We show that, while the observed wind ramps exhibit wind speed and direction changes with similar magnitudes to the ECD, the observed rise times are an order of magnitude longer. Furthermore, the observed events are more complex than the idealized ECD profile, displaying spatial and temporal variations that cause significant variability in wind turbine power generation.
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- RC1: 'Comment on wes-2026-82', Anonymous Referee #1, 06 Jul 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on wes-2026-82', Anonymous Referee #2, 30 Jul 2026
This manuscript presents a detailed analysis of thunderstorm outflow-induced wind ramps based on multi-lidar observations. The dataset is valuable, and it is clear that a significant amount of work has gone into the data processing, event characterization, and analysis. In particular, the results concerning the spatial variability of the events and the apparent mismatch between changes in wind speed and wind direction are interesting and potentially novel. However, the manuscript would benefit from substantial restructuring, a clearer statement of its scientific objectives, and a more careful interpretation of the comparison with the IEC Extreme Coherent Gust with Direction Change (ECD).
Major comments
1. Clarify the research objectives and contribution
At present, I find it difficult to identify the main research question of the study and how it is specifically connected to wind energy applications. While the manuscript contains a large amount of analysis, the scientific focus is not sufficiently clear. I encourage the authors to formulate clear research questions early in the manuscript and ensure that the subsequent analysis is structured around answering them.
In my view, the most novel aspects of the work are the observed spatial variability of the events and the mismatch in timing and rise time between wind speed and wind direction changes. These findings deserve greater emphasis and could form the central focus of the paper. In contrast, the comparison with the IEC ECD appears less convincing in its current form and tends to dominate the discussion despite a limited basis for comparison.2. Interpretation of the comparison with IEC extreme event
Several parts of the manuscript imply a direct comparison between the six observed thunderstorm outflow events and the ECD. I do not believe such a comparison is fully justified without additional context.
The IEC ECD is not intended to represent a thunderstorm outflow event. Rather, it represents an unspecified extreme wind event with a recurrence period of 50 years. By contrast, the events analyzed in this study are individual observed cases whose recurrence periods are unknown and are not demonstrated to correspond to 50-year events. This important distinction should be clearly acknowledged throughout the manuscript.
Related to this point, the statement that the ECD represents a "worst-case scenario" is not strictly correct. The ECD represents an extreme design event. Because the relevant parameters are modeled together and are not necessarily independent, the fact that one observed parameter exceeds the corresponding ECD value does not imply that the event exceeds the design condition as a whole. The manuscript should avoid such interpretations.
More generally, it is unclear what the authors intend to demonstrate through the ECD comparison. Are they attempting to show that the ECD is insufficiently conservative, or simply that real events exhibit different characteristics (which has already been done)? Such questions cannot be convincingly addressed using statistics from only six events and should therefore be discussed more cautiously.3. Literature context
The discussion would benefit from additional references.
The manuscript cites Kelly et al. in a manner that could be interpreted as a study specifically of thunderstorm gust fronts. However, Kelly et al. investigated extreme wind ramps more broadly, a category that includes but is not limited to thunderstorm gust fronts. The corresponding text should be revised to better reflect the scope of that work.
Another relevant study is Hannesdóttir et al. (https://wes.copernicus.org/articles/8/231/2023/), which investigates extreme coherent gusts and associated turbine loading and includes extrapolation to 50-year return levels. This perspective is particularly relevant to the discussion of extreme-event characterization and design implications.
Furthermore, the statement that shorter-timescale changes may be more damaging to turbines because they provide less time for control-system response is supported by previous work, including Hannesdóttir et al.(https://wes.copernicus.org/articles/8/231/2023/). Adding references here would strengthen the discussion, which currently reads somewhat speculatively.4. Methodological clarification
Several aspects of the methodology require further clarification:The manuscript refers to an edge/boundary detection methodology. Is this an existing method from the literature, and if so, please provide an appropriate citation (other than the scikit Python library)? If it is a new adaptation, this should be clearly stated.
5. Characterization methodology
Line 271 states: "Having developed a method for characterizing thunderstorm outflow-induced wind ramps..."
This wording overstates the contribution. The authors appear to have modified and applied an existing characterization framework rather than developed an entirely new method. This statement needs rephrasing to more accurately reflect the contribution.6. Discussion and conclusion
The discussion and the conclusions become somewhat unfocused. I suggest shortening these sections and concentrating on the primary findings that are directly supported by the presented analysis.
The conclusions introduce several new topics that are not sufficiently developed in the main manuscript.
The final paragraphs of the conclusion introduce several new concepts, including wind farm control strategies, forecasting applications, economic impacts, grid resilience. These topics have not been discussed in the preceding sections and therefore feel disconnected from the rest of the manuscript. I recommend removing most of this material from the conclusion. The conclusion should focus on the main findings of the present study and their direct implications.Minor comments
- Line 105: The sentence describing the lidar scan duration is unclear. It is not evident whether the approximately 5 s refers to the complete scan sequence or only the vertical beam measurement. Please rephrase for clarity.
- The carrier-to-noise ratio threshold differs between the two lidars. Please explain the reason for using different thresholds.
- In Table 2, some boundaries appear to be defined using wind direction and others using wind speed. The rationale for this choice is not clear and should be explained.
Overall assessment
The manuscript contains a valuable dataset and several interesting analyses. In particular, the spatial structure of the events, their variability, and the apparent mismatch in timing and rise rates between speed and direction changes appear to provide genuinely new insights. However, the manuscript would benefit from a clearer research focus, a more concise structure, and a more cautious treatment of comparisons with IEC design conditions. I encourage the authors to strengthen the motivation and novelty around the observed spatiotemporal characteristics of the events and reduce the emphasis on direct comparisons with the ECD, which are difficult to interpret given the limited sample size and the fundamentally different purposes of the observed events and the IEC design model.Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/wes-2026-82-RC2
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General comments
The manuscript proposes a novel method using remote sensing technology to determine Extreme Coherent Gust with Direction change (ECD) parameters. The manuscript provides adequate background and derives standardized parameters based on lidar, SCADA, and in-situ measurements. The proposed methodology and procedures are generally sound and well-described. The findings reveal the spatial variability of this type of complex flow and demonstrate how these events deviate from the IEC standard, posing unique challenges for wind farm power generation. We recommend this manuscript for publication following the adaptations listed below.
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