The labels of the following figures is too small!!!

3, 4, 6, 7, 9, 11, 12, 13, 16, 18, 19, 27, 30, 31, 32, A1, A2, A3, B1, B2, B3, B4, C1, C2

Table 1: Instead of "x" put "name of the research institute / name of Code" 

Table 3: where is the difference between P4 and P5? Maybe write in the "Wake Model" line "Calibration1" and "Calibration2"

Figure 3: Include SMV5 in the caption

Figure 4: Include SMV7 in the caption

Figure 3, Figure 4: what do the empty black circles represent?

Figure 5a: diagramm "WS", caption "delta_WS": correct one of them.

Table 6: Describe the parameters "alpha", "beta", ...,"n". Best, if also in the text!

Figure 9: Distinguish blue dot from green line (not both measurement)! And orange dot from red line!

Figure 10: Lines too thick, not clearly visible! Make lines (symbols) smaller

Line 408: Why are the wind direction bins in the text +-2.5° and in Figure 12 the labels are by 2°?

Figure 12 left: Colours not always easy to distinguish, put symbols

Figure 12: Why line plot (left) and bar diagramm (red)? No added value!

Same for Figure 13:

Rewrite Lines 405 - 422 because concept is quite complex and not described enough. Especially rename term "P_i_Test" 

because the naming is confusing! Give table with weights and explain concept much more detailed.

Line 1000: give equivalent number of revolutions for 3600s simulation time

Table 10: line for partner description

Figure 30: Labels too small

Line 1089: make clear what is meant by subset! WT32,WT28 and WT29, WT25 or different? All turbines in the parc?

Line 1123,1124: 8-turbine subset have to be horizontal lines! WT32, WT25,..., WT1 are not in a row!

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