In this article, the authors develop a new analytical wind-farm flow model which accounts for larger wake losses deep in a wind farm and more persistent wake losses in the far-wake region. The model, which is named the cumulative-curl model, is then extensively validated against LES results (from SOWFA) and SCADA data for three different offshore wind farms. Two main conclusions can be drawn from the validation campaign. First, the model compares reasonably well with numerical data and measurements in all cases considered. Second, the new model outperforms the GCH one in cases with large wake losses and wake recovery over large turbine distances while it performs similarly in the other cases. I believe that this paper is of interest to the wind energy community as it shows the potential of a new analytical flow model which partially solves a long-standing problem, that is the mismatch in predictions in case of deep-array effects. Moreover, I enjoyed reading this work, which is well presented and well structured. Here below, you can find some scientific questions and technical comments.

Scientific comments/questions:

1. Abstract: it could be more descriptive. For instance, the authors write “Two points of model discrepancy were identified therein. The present article addresses those two concerns and presents the cumulative-curl (CC) model.” Which are these two concerns? They will become clear once reading the text, but I would find it useful to mention them here. Also, would it be possible to translate the “improved accuracy” or “greatly reducing the computational time” into percentage and speed-up values?
2. Section 2: I understand that it is more practical to cite others' works instead of re-writing the full model. Eventually, this also makes the article easier to read. However, I find it difficult to follow at times. For instance, the authors mention that the original cumulative wake model proposed in Bastankhah et al. (2021) does not include a near-wake model. However, in the current work, this deficiency is overcome by representing the near-wake region with a super-Gaussian wake model. How is this done? Is there an analytical derivation? I think that the reader would benefit from a more in-depth description of the model, which could also be provided in the appendix.
3. Section 3.1 (line 167): Which is the horizontal resolution used in the precursor simulation? Also, for how long the precursor simulations have been advanced in time?
4. Section 3.1 (line 197): From where does this formula come? Consider adding a reference. Also, I would consider a different notation for the wind speed (ws can be seen as w*s in a mathematical expression).
5. Section 3.1 (line 230): For how long the wind-farm simulations are run in SOFWA? In the article, it is reported only the spin-up time (1200 s), but not the time over which statistics are collected.
6. Section 3.2: Over which region the velocity is spatially averaged to produce the power trends observed in Fig. 1? Is the height-dependent velocity profile given by the precursor simulations taken into account in the analytical models (GCH and CC)? Or do the analytical model assumes a uniform inflow velocity profile? If so, how is the velocity magnitude estimated? Does it refer to the velocity at hub height? This information can improve the interpretation of the validation results.
7. Section 3.2 (line 243): The authors mention that “The TI assumed in the GCH and CC models was selected to yield perfect agreement with SOWFA at a 7D distance downstream.” I believe that if the TI value was tuned so that a zero error would occur at 5D or 10D, the validation would look different. Therefore, why not use the ambient TI reported in table 1 (i.e. the ambient TI values given by the precursor simulations)? Please, comment on this.
8. Section 3.2.2: How is the ambient TI evaluated in this section? Are the authors using the ambient TI shown in table 1? I’m concerned about the ambient TI because usually, the analytical wake model predictions are strongly dependent on this value. Moreover, it is important to mention the ambient TI in case of the reader would like to reproduce some of the results. Note that the same question holds also for sections 3.3 and 3.4. Finally, it is not clear to me how the added TI is computed. Would it be possible to include this in the text?
9. Figure 2: I find this plot difficult to read. Have you tried using different symbols instead of different lines for the various precursor cases? That is just a suggestion since it may make it worst.
10. Figure 5: Why the GCH and CC first-row turbine power is lower than the one predicted by SOFWA in all cases? This mismatch (although limited to a few percentage points) could lead to a bias in the measurements further downstream. Moreover, I would find it very interesting to include the prediction of, for instance, the Jensen model in the current figure. This could highlight how much better the models have become at matching LES results. However, I also understand that this could be out of the scope of the current manuscript.
11. Figure 7: Which are the yaw angles applied at every turbine row? The authors mention that “This pattern assumes a large yaw misalignment angle for the first row of turbines, which then decreases linearly to zero for the last row of wind turbines.”. However, they do not provide the yaw misalignment for the first row of turbines. This information is necessary in case of the reader would like to reproduce the results.
12. Section 4: Very nice and strong validation of the model. I have only a minor question here. In figure 15 (top panel), both models predict a lower energy ratio for a wind direction of 140 degrees than 320 degrees. Why is this happening? In fact, in the first case, turbine 22 operates in the wake of one turbine while in the second case it operates in the wake of six upwind turbines.
13. I noticed that in many cases the caption of the figures also contains interpretations of the results. I would use the caption only for describing the figure, therefore moving the interpretation of the results in the main text.

Technical comments:

1. Line 247: Typo “largely largely”
2. line 320: re-phrase the sentence

This paper gives adds the super-Gaussian model of Blondel and Cathelain and the cumulative wake superposition of Bastankhah et al. to the Gauss-curl hybrid model to address issues with deep array effects. The comparisons to high-fidelity models and field data are comprehensive. The paper is a worthwhile addition to the considerable research on wind farm wake modeling that is necessary for wind farm design and control.

Introduction: I enjoyed this clear discussion of the complications of wake modeling (including wake super position and near and far wake models) in various wind farm configurations. Two issues that could use some discussion are (1) momentum conserving models and linearized momentum conserving models (often called mass conserving models) and (2) the choice of wake expansion rate through turbulence characteristics. 

Section 2.2: It is hard to decipher where each of these equations come from and how they have been modified in this implementation. Is there a consistent theoretical basis for adding the Blondel & Cathelain model and cumulative model of Bastankhah et al. to the GCH model? Or are the additions heuristic?

Section 2.2: This model has a large number of free parameters, which makes it more difficult to use. Could you discuss in more depth how these parameters are selected to make the model more widely useable.

All graphs: Please use vector formats for these images and use consistent font sizes. The resolution is fairly low and the font is sometimes hard to read. Use more descriptive titles without using underscores.

Figure 1: The improvement here is not as apparent to me as claimed in the text. I would have assumed that the super-Gaussian near wake model would improve the agreement in the near wake. In fact, the opposite seems to be the case. Furthermore, the choice to tune the results at x/D=7 affects the model accuracy. If the tuning had been done at x/D=3 the results might be quite different. A better approach would be to minimize the error over all measurements.

Section 3.2.2: Since these results are for a single turbine, they are only including the effect of including the Blondel & Cathelain model in the GCH model and the Bastankhah model does that have an impact, correct? Or am I misunderstanding that? I suggest adding some discussion on what aspects of the model are being tested here.

Section 4: The paper has a lot of great data for the comparison. While the graphs are very instructive to understand the differences between the models, it’s hard to compare the average error. Could you provide average error results for each of these graphs in a table?

Figure 10: What do the color plots on the right represent? There is no label and they are difficult to read. 

Sections 3&4: I suggest changing the “Reflection” subsections to “Discussion."